|author||brian m. carlson <firstname.lastname@example.org>||2013-02-10 18:04:13 +0000|
|committer||brian m. carlson <email@example.com>||2013-02-10 18:04:13 +0000|
Signed-off-by: brian m. carlson <firstname.lastname@example.org>
Diffstat (limited to 'aoif')
1 files changed, 30 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/aoif/water-dream.dbx b/aoif/water-dream.dbx
index 13ba72c..be0202d 100644
@@ -12,12 +12,34 @@
- <literallayout xml:space="preserve" class="normal">You walk up to a large bathtub full of soapy water. It contains three nude,
-attractive young men in it. You join them. One of them introduces himself
-as Dustin. He is by far the most attractive. The bathtub starts rolling
-down the railroad tracks. You do not notice that the ground has fallen away.
-The tracks end abruptly in mid-air. You and the bathtub drop
-down into a unlined rectangular pool about six feet deep.
-The young men have disappeared. The water is cool, blue-hued, and translucent.
-You breathe normally under the water.</literallayout>
+ <literallayout xml:space="preserve" class="normal">You walk up to a bathtub,
+large, clawfooted, full
+of soapy water
+and three young men:
+You join them. One says,
+he catches your eye so
+that you don't care
+that much about the others.
+The bathtub starts rolling
+down the railroad tracks;
+you do not notice the ground
+has fallen away.
+The tracks end
+You and the bathtub drop
+down into a pool,
+six feet deep.
+The young men
+You breathe normally
+under the water, cool,