Update iridescent-dream

Provide a conclusion which is not terrifying.  Not everything needs to
be terrible and sometimes people actually enjoy having pleasant dreams,
shocking as that might be.  This passage still needs work and may need
to be rewritten entirely, but at least it's a step in the right
direction.

Additionally, adjust the title depth to avoid creating a needless section.

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/working/iridescent-dream.adoc b/working/iridescent-dream.adoc
index 17c8bbf..64c2d50 100644
--- a/working/iridescent-dream.adoc
+++ b/working/iridescent-dream.adoc
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-== In Your Iridescent Dream
+= In Your Iridescent Dream
 
 [verse]
 ____
@@ -42,6 +42,10 @@ You drive down the road as it seems
 to get even darker. The streetlights have gone
 away, your headlights dim, you remain behind
 the wheel. You step on the brake,
-do not stop. You have lost all feeling.
-You want to open your eyes but cannot.
+gently coast to a stop at the side of the road.
+A deer walks by your car.
+You breathe the cool air in
+through your nostrils,
+feel alive and somehow
+awake.
 ____