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authorbrian m. carlson <>2020-04-26 19:03:34 +0000
committerbrian m. carlson <>2020-04-26 19:03:34 +0000
commit648f5bfbf67f6e23d4816e8bd9ce0cec096152b8 (patch)
parent316111b66ed433910cddea20d9b48c763e7c6ff1 (diff)
Update iridescent-dream
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@@ -13,12 +13,13 @@ It tastes of strawberry kiwi.
You go out on the porch.
The neighbor's wind chimes start
tolling the hour.
-The jasmine along the fence
-reaches out to greet you.
+The honeysuckle along the fence
+reaches out to greet you. You breathe in;
+the fragrance coats your nose.
You watch the sun start to rise.
-The colors in the sky iridesce
-into a lion's head. It roars
+The mulberry and marigold in the sky
+iridesce into a lion's head. It roars
silently and a staircase falls out.
You walk up it quickly to prevent the sun